The peer editing on Friday really helped me with my paper. As far as revisions go, I'm going to add a few personal experiences to my work. i truly dislike putting my own experiences in a paper. i just find using 'I' and talking about myself in an academic writing to be unprofessional. unless of course the prompt calls for a personal narrative or what not. im only now begging to understand that relating myself to a text really emphasizes my understanding of said text. plus, as a reader, i do enjoy learning about other peoples experiences. so why wouldnt others enjoy reading about mine?
Id like to thank David B. for his suggestions on my paper. little things like making my transitions more smooth really improved my work.
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